Publication 672
By Arcadian on
Friday, October 15, 2004
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Garden Reverie
Silence, solemn meditation
upright and motionless
there in the midst of anemones
and buttercups
wings drawn back;
veined petals of desire
in the gentle draughts
and scents of Spring
A maiden dressed in white
festooned with garlands
awaits near the mineral spa
that babbles of amorous arrows:
can they find their mark in a heart
so as to be carried over the threshold
of wind flowers to a joyous banquet and dances ?
A sudden rustle nearby: eternity broken.
Petals quiver and wings outstretch
ready for a spirited departure
in a sea of anemone memories.
Publication 679
By orwell on
Tuesday, October 26, 2004
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Nice poem.
Your poem wonderfully combines both form & image into a delicately paced measure of silent grace or is that the hidden movements, only the Poet sees in true vision.
Many Thanks
Publication 715
By Arcadian on
Monday, January 31, 2005
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Thanks for the feedback Orwell,
Im a glad you liked my poem
cheers
Arco
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